Each month, write a new collection.
Get to the point. You said/I use too many words/ My apologies, my loveLet’s go to the movies instead/And examine the lives of others with/Popcorn and chocolate covered raisins/And please, my darlingplease refrain from talking
This is fantastic, Judy! There's so much going on here. I'd send it to Cadence Collective if you have any connection to Long Beach. I bet they'd publish it.Really,I have no comments for improvement.
Apology PoemThe Sin: So, Baby...I did it with my employer.Apology: You said be good to you and I said the same. But so many times you ticked me off and made me jealous by the things you'd do and say, so i did it with him...all the way. I'm sorry. Please forgive me. You kind of deserved it though. I love you so much that I don't want to let you go though.I plan to do it with him again and continue. So I'm sorry. Please stay with me though. I love you si bad and still want to be with you too. You being in another state is tough. As always, suggestions and comments are welcome Mr. Brantingham. Thank you.
Hey Corrina, I didn't see this yet. This is great!
Thanks so much, your critiques are always welcome whether harsh or sweet. I respect your opinion immensely.